Would make good eerie background music, BUT...
The production, frankly, is just bad. Lower your levels, seriously, it's distorting pretty much all the time. So spend more time mixing and mastering your song.
However, the production of the second half is fairly good, not noticing any distortion there.
Unrelated to production, this should really be uploaded as two separate songs, the second half is drastically different from the first.
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